Oh no! You've been trapped in a snow globe!!! Tell your story.
****Your beginning should tell how you got into the snow globe in the first place. (Was it an evil elf? An experiement at Santa's workshop gone wrong?) ****Your rising action should tell us some ways that you tried to escape, but they didn't work. ****Your climax should be the moment when you break free of the globe! (Or do you get free? Mwah ha ha!) ***** How do you feel now that the story is over?
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Tytan
12/16/2013 01:02:36 am
The day I got suck in a snow globe. One day I was playing with my snow globe. Then I saw the snow man move and then he made a sine that Sade come with me. I got scared and then I feel a sleep. By the time I wuck up I was in a snow globe. I thride to get out by getting the snow mans hand and whack it on the glass that did not work. So I the snow man's head and that did not
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Tytan
12/16/2013 01:11:56 am
Work ether so the snow man pushed the snow globe and then it came to me. He was push the snow globe off the bed so it will brake open. So me and the snow man pushed with all of are mite and then it fell. And it Broke open and I was free. But then my mom said Tytan get up and I got up. It was all gust a dream. THE END
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Jenny
12/22/2021 03:08:47 pm
that is creative
jack
12/16/2013 10:25:59 pm
I am a elf me and santa where working on something big!
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Alexndra Rush
12/11/2020 08:44:30 am
are you acsly a elf?
jerry
1/27/2022 06:52:05 pm
i had that idea but with a twist
Alexndra Rush
12/11/2020 08:43:37 am
you did not spell so stuff right.
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Evelyn Ashby
2/16/2021 01:16:26 pm
Don't be rude >:(
Tatum
12/16/2013 01:03:21 am
It was Christmas Eve. I was determined to catch Santa clause. I was so tired. I went into the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard something! I went outside and there was a sleigh on the roof! I rushed inside and there he was, in the living room, putting presents under the Christmas tree! It was Santa! I got a ladder, went outside and got into the sleigh. He came out and we flew! In a couple of seconds, we were at the North Pole.
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Tatum
12/16/2013 01:10:29 am
Santa went into a room and when he was gone, I got out too. I went into a room and there were millions of presents! I was in santa's workshop! Then I saw a tiny elf come toward me. He said, why are you in here? Suddenly I shrunk! I was in a glass ball with snow every where! I banged on the glass, and I yelped for help. Nothing worked. Then, a giant hand picked the snow globe up and I grew and suddenly, I was in in my bed.
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Madison Nguyen
12/18/2023 12:10:12 pm
great!!!
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Hayden
12/16/2013 01:08:54 am
If I ever got trapped in a snow this the first thing I'll do to get out
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Evelyn
2/16/2021 01:11:06 pm
*In awe* XD good job
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Hunter
12/16/2013 01:28:09 am
Help, Im trapped in a snowgolb.Help Help I yelled.Nobody came.I wouldn't be trapped in here if there wasn't a explosian in the toy factory.If your wondering how I survived there was a house that has supplies in it.Thw house never runs out of food or water but it is always freezing.There is no ac,no bed and no blanket. All I have is my jacket,pants and other winter cloths.Some how I'm gonna bust out.
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Hayden
12/18/2013 10:26:15 pm
Awsome 😊😌
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Evelyn Ashby
2/16/2021 01:11:58 pm
yep
Bigguy
12/18/2013 10:27:04 pm
That is a long story.
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Evelyn Ashby
2/16/2021 01:11:38 pm
No joke that's why it's good
Addison
12/16/2013 04:03:49 am
I was at the North Poel nd i did something bd so Santa put me in a glob that. Has a key. So he had a hammer and try ed to brack the glass.right befor he almost brack it Santa sol and tough magic so it will not brack.fanilyhe brocket!
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Christiana
12/16/2013 10:02:15 pm
Good
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Christiana
12/16/2013 10:00:18 pm
Annsleigh, Will and I are trapped in a snow globe because, Will's elf on the shelf has a shrink gun. The snow globe has a big Santa toy which can come alive. We stole the magic dust from the Santa toy's pocket and put it on the santa toy so he could fall asleep so that he could not stop us from getting out. "Now we have to find something to use to get out of here I said". We looked every where but did not find any thing. 1hour later Will and I found a way to escape the snow globe while Annsleigh was asleep. When Annsleigh woke up we told her our plan she liked it. The plan was to git every thing the santa toy had which was a hammer a sow and a later. We put the later agents the glass, thin we hit the glass with the hammer, and last we got the sow and cut the roof of. Annsleigh was scared to go up the 80 ft later. The elf tried to stop us but.....we put the magic dust on him and we got back to our normal size!!!!!!
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Christiana
12/16/2013 10:05:59 pm
I mean then and get.
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Tatum
12/16/2013 10:07:41 pm
Good! I like it.
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A Random Gurl
2/16/2021 01:13:57 pm
That is a long story XD Good job
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Esteban
12/16/2013 10:04:20 pm
If I wuss tart in a snow glob I wood be scad and I wood saw let me out of here.
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Addison
12/16/2013 10:06:10 pm
The rest of it is . All the elms shoved him back in and locked it.the key was right there a got the key and unlocked it . The elf polarise . And they all got to dilever presents .
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jack
12/16/2013 10:28:06 pm
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Logan
12/16/2013 10:36:13 pm
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Tony hey-hey
12/2/2021 04:18:22 am
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,n,
12/8/2021 09:10:00 pm
nnm
Logan
12/16/2013 10:30:32 pm
I'm stuck in this snow globe because I ate this weird gingerbread man
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logan bad
12/16/2013 10:45:32 pm
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Eshen
12/17/2013 04:50:23 am
It's a great story 👏👏👏clap
jake paul
11/27/2018 03:06:30 pm
wow
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Paul
12/16/2013 10:34:05 pm
B Me and my dad where at the store.
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T DOG
12/16/2013 10:34:22 pm
I was walking down the road and poof santa claws but me in a SNOW BLOBE!!! O KNOW. I tried to get out and my dad tried to get me out but we couldn't do it and for Christmas Day i was stuck in the snow globe and i never got out.
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Annsleigh
12/16/2013 10:42:32 pm
Me and my mom were walking in the store and then I saw the awesome snow glob ever and I ask my mom if I could go look at it she said ok. I wheat to it it was siny and I got closer and closer and then the bad prate came. I was stack in the glob I was scared. I rameberd that I had my pocket knife I tried to cut the glass. That did not work I also had my a snow men I could bund in to it I was nock out. Then my mom comes acralse and I yelled HELP she pick it up and bops it. I was okay I love my life with my mom better then livening in a snow glob
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Mia
12/12/2023 06:51:44 pm
Can you spell better?
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Riley
12/16/2013 10:44:13 pm
If I was trapped in a snow globe I would go crazy. I would half to be tinny to fall into a snow globe. the only way that I could fall in one is if I was on a Christmas tree and fell. Or my dog could hit me with her tail and it would make me go way up in the air. Any way I would not like to be trapped in a snow globe. I mean how would I get out would I half to drink all of the water so I get heavy and crush it. I don't know but how ever I would half to do it would be hard.
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Michael littles
12/16/2013 10:46:49 pm
I'm scard. Why? Look behind you. Aaaaaaaaah who are you? I can't tell you you're gonna be talking all about it. Now I'm gonna keep all of you peoples in this snow glob for eternity! How will we get out? I have a stong fist set me handel this. He yo! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. I can't fill my hands. Oh tring to live are we then how will you fill when I shack the snow glob. Aaaaaaaaah! I fill like I'm gonna barf.
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Michael littles
12/16/2013 11:00:33 pm
Hay guy I just remember that I had a hammer. Well get it. Ok here I go. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Cling clang bang. I did it were free hay look there's a car. Hay what are you doing with my car? By!!!!!
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Hayden
12/18/2013 10:23:06 pm
Like it
Emma Brewer
12/16/2013 11:01:20 pm
I was at a gift shop. There was a snow globe. I bought it but it was a trick! I was trapped in a snow globe with cool fake lightning and a Snowman! I always remember to bring tools!😃 First I tried a grappling hook. That didn't work.😔 Then I tried my pickaxe. Well It didn't work either.😔 Then I found my sword!😃 I tried it. It worked!😃
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Emma B
12/16/2013 11:07:48 pm
...I finally got out!😃 It was snowing outside!😃 I went outside to play and never saw that gift shop again! Hm. ?
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Evelyn LI
12/15/2021 03:32:20 pm
Nice.
Hayden
12/18/2013 10:24:22 pm
Cool😊
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Stephany
12/16/2013 11:05:43 pm
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Eshen
12/17/2013 05:11:31 am
The shrinking nator drop then it shrink me then I got stock then I
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Eshen
12/18/2013 04:58:10 am
(Redo)
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Austin
12/17/2013 05:18:35 am
One day I heard that they were making big snow globs. I was so exited that I whated to work at the factory where they make big snow globs.
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Hayden
12/18/2013 10:39:26 pm
Cool😊☺️😉😄😄😀
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Travis
12/17/2013 08:16:32 am
One day I heard Santa but not the same this Santa was
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Emma Acquistapace
12/17/2013 09:46:12 am
It was dark when I got home one clear cold night. My dad was cooking in the kitchen. I looked out the kitchen window and saw a bright red and green light fall from the sky behind our creek. My dad and I put on our boots and went to see what the light was behind our creek. We saw this light coming from the ground and before my dad said to be careful I fell into this large globe surrounded by red and green light. It was very warm and could hear music but I could not see or hear my dad. It was very pretty inside the globe and after a little while i was scared and missed my dad. I screamed on for my dad but hep was not there and rightp when I thought I would be trapped forever his hand appeared through the top of the light and pulled me out of the globe. We watched the light slowly go away and the globe crumble into dust.
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Tytan
12/18/2013 10:43:43 pm
The Day I Got Stuck in a Snow Globe
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Luke
12/18/2013 10:44:48 pm
Once I was playing with a snow globe. When I shuck it the snow globe broke and sucked me in I was trapped in it oh no!!!!!! I couldn't sleep at all. There was spider webs and no one there. But I looked in the corner and I found where the snow comes from and I took it off and smashed the window and there was a way out. When I went out there was no one there. Then I had to go back in the snow globe. I found out it was a time machine I went back into the future then my family was there. THE END
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Andre
1/8/2019 04:39:31 pm
you yah you get me out I am stuck
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cruiz
12/7/2020 08:37:55 am
hello
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payton wheles
12/7/2021 06:52:46 am
thanks this really helped me with my essay my teacher gave me
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Evelyn L
12/15/2021 03:34:11 pm
That's a great essay. I really helped me think of a prompt for my writing tourtament
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Jenny
12/22/2021 03:18:04 pm
I got stuck in a snow globe I went to take a picture with Santa claus and then he gave me a snow globe but then I dropped it and got stuck to it a witch was teaching how to do magic and a dragon was teaching me how to fly then some weird mysterious man said we needed to change back in time and get out of here and get a piece of glass so then I used magic to change back in time and got the glass and shaped it to a heart then i made a necklace and when I rub it I get to visit the snow globe place then I got home with my family and I get to visit the snow globe whenever I rub it THE END
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DIE BYE
12/22/2021 03:22:44 pm
I WILL HACK YOU TILL YOU DIE SO GOOD BYE
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Jenny
12/22/2021 03:24:22 pm
😶
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