Let's try adding at least three adverbs to our myths.
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Luke
1/13/2014 11:45:48 pm
Once there was a cat army and they wanted the underground dogs gold very badly and silver. So they bombed the ground to see if they were under there. But they weren't there they were searching and searching and they finally had one more catbomb and they placed it and the dogs were there were. They heard the catbombs so they were ready. They got to there house and the cats were climbing on the walls so the dogs wouldn't see them. They got to the gold and then one of the dogs had a cold and he sneezed AHCHOO!!! very loudly Then the dogs caught them and then they started to run away quickly and one of the Dogs had there dogbomb and threw it 17 yards and hit a cat then the cats never came again that why there are caves and plains.
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Luke
1/13/2014 11:46:45 pm
Nice Luke!
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Jack
1/13/2014 11:56:58 pm
The first Valley.
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Hayden
1/13/2014 11:46:34 pm
Once there lived a man who lived by a lot of faults and when ever there was a earth quack he will go outside bravely
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Brianna
1/13/2014 11:46:52 pm
Once upon a time there was a little house on the mountain and on the mountain there was a volcano and one day it erupted and the people survived but they did not know that there was another volcano in front of them so they would keep on running and finally they ran a different way because they saw the other volcano.
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Will
1/13/2014 11:50:54 pm
Try putting the important stuff (like names) first. But other than that I like it :).
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Will
1/13/2014 11:48:07 pm
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Annsleigh
1/13/2014 11:48:49 pm
Onece in a land far far away there was girl named Ashley. And she had sopper powers her sopper power was sopper speed. All the anther kids had no sopper powers so she had to keep it a srcerit. One day she was racing her friend and she won but did not stop so she ran quickly. She kept going and going and going she finely stoped and then the wined behind her kept going so. It costed a tornado. When the tornado stoped all of the people were mad. They say Ashley what have you done and what was that. We'll she said softly I have sopper speed all of the anther kids said cool,awesome!wow they said it loudly. The mom who ask her went wow and that is how tornado
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Christiana
1/13/2014 11:49:03 pm
How The Plateau Became A Mountain
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Tytan
1/13/2014 11:51:04 pm
One day a little boy named tom. He lived in a small village named Greek. Avery day he walks on a road to his friends house. His friends names where Zeus and Jim. They were oddly not the same but in one way they where the same and that way was that they both like to go out side every day and paint on a stone with dirt.
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Tatum
1/13/2014 11:54:48 pm
Once a long, long time ago there was a giant. He was bored. All he had were two tiny golden eggs. A few days later, he found himself a home in a huge cave. He went to sleep. Meanwhile, not far away a boy named jack and his mother lived in a little cottage. Sadly,they did tnot have enough to eat. His mother sent him out to find some berries. He went out into the mountain and , out of the corner of his eye he surprisingly saw something sparkling in the giant's cave. He ran down slowly and silently and got the golden eggs. He went back home and put them into the kitchen quietly. Then the giant woke up. He saw that the eggs were gone. He went out looking and found the cottage. Jack came out. The giant bellowed angrily," Where are my golden eggs?" He stomped on the ground loudly . Then Jack gave them to him and he was mad. He rapidly ran and ran away from the cottage. He sat on the mountains and they became plateaus. Jack sat next to him and said," Sorry giant. I didn't know." The giant said," I guess it's ok. I'm sorry." Jack replied," Let's be friends." "Ok, great!"the giant roared. And that was how plateaus were formed
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Riley
1/13/2014 11:56:09 pm
How snow first got on a mountain. Zeus was chasing Percy Jackson on March 28. Percy went up a mountain and Aldewin the gray snow dragon tried to strike Percy with snow it was a powerful hit but Aldewin missed and hit the mountain. Then the mountain was snowy. And that is How snow first got on a mountain.
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Riley
1/13/2014 11:58:15 pm
Nice riley
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Esteban
1/14/2014 12:00:21 am
A long time ago there was a big monster sleeping in is cave. a little rabbit ran as slowly as he could. the monster heard the rabbit and he stood up quickly . an went out of his cave and he saw the rabbit running rapidly and the monster ran . tried to catch the rabbit but he was too fast . the monster had in a Idea he got on top of the mountain. and he jumped to the ground . he almost got the rabbit . the rabbit ran full speed to get away from the monster . the rabbit hid cleverly behind the mountain . the monster hit the mount . made the top of the mount flat. The monster lost his dinner because the rabbit was way smarter and faster than the rabbit. The end
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Addison
1/14/2014 12:02:22 am
A long long time ago.there was five animals dinsor bear lion cheta coyote. One day they got together and laughed loudly and played lots of things like ball,races,and lunch.and then they got in a fight and and yelled loudly and stomped there paws. Sidney the ground shook.and that the first earth quack.
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Austin
1/14/2014 12:12:54 am
One day the three suns were playing with the earth as a ball in space.
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