Alright my authors, here is your challenge. Describe your favorite food to me! As I read, I should be able to taste, smell, hear, touch, and see your food without even seeing a picture. Wow me with your words!
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Samuel
10/18/2013 02:01:52 am
I like ice cream. It is so rich and creamy I love it so much it tastes sweet and good.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 06:47:09 am
I might want it, but what kind is the question?
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mike anderson
10/18/2013 04:10:03 am
Browneis.So choclety smooth and gooy so tasty and smell so delisiose
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 06:48:27 am
Yum! I definitely am in the mood for brownies now!
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Carmen
10/18/2013 04:11:00 am
My favorite food is creamy,a warm tempuresure, and noodley, saucey,
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 06:51:23 am
I like the way you think! Is it Mac and Cheese?
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Jack
10/18/2013 04:30:41 am
My food is brownie cake, it's smooth as silk and hard on the top.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 06:53:04 am
I like the way you you used a similie, "smooth as silk". Good job!
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Katherine
10/18/2013 04:33:24 am
It was creamy and rich. Whipped cream on the top. Silky smooth! I love chocolate pudding cake.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 06:53:49 am
Yum!
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Grace
10/18/2013 04:33:57 am
Describing food
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 06:55:30 am
I love your "appetizing words"! Could you change the beginning of your sentences to make your description flow better?
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Parker
10/18/2013 04:34:05 am
My favriot food is watermelon
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 06:58:56 am
You had some really great adjectives in here! Be sure you use complete sentences to help your readers understand your opinion. :)
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Meredith
10/18/2013 04:35:00 am
My Favorite Food
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:00:59 am
I love that you included a memory of your family! What do you see when you cook hot dogs? Does it sizzle?
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Dustin
10/18/2013 04:35:05 am
The secret recipe for delicious brownies. It's crispy and gooey with a great taste of chocolate. The secret ingredient is extra chocolate chips that are bigger than most. It's also very rich and they smell very good. It's great for parties and just good deserts at home.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:01:44 am
It's official! I need some brownies!
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Regan
10/18/2013 04:43:14 am
My favorite food is cheesy, gooey, smooth macaroni and cheese. Its my favorite because of the orange, yellow and delicious noodles, that you can smell all the way from upstairs! Mac and cheese is also good with the rich, yummy, red sauce on it!
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:02:37 am
Nice job! My stomach is growling!
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Kennedy
10/18/2013 04:49:09 am
Chicken and rice chicken is juin the rice is smoth
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:03:30 am
You've got a nice start here Kennedy. Tell me more?
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Esteban
10/18/2013 04:53:23 am
I like chocltet much the sweet taste clmll sweet choclet.
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Hayden
10/18/2013 04:57:23 am
Very sweet and creamy full of favors. With crumbly cookies in it. With a vanilla flavored relly good with chaclate syrup.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:08:05 am
I loved your descriptive words. Be sure to write in complete sentences. (A who or what should be followed by an action. ;) )
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Emma E
10/18/2013 04:59:04 am
I love brownies. I can hear my mom bake brownies. I can smell the brownies they smell so chocolatey!!
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William
10/18/2013 07:05:17 am
What does heaven taste like?
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:05:06 am
I love that you told me how they smell. :) What do they look like?
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Ryann
10/18/2013 05:17:57 am
French toast is my favorite
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Rachel
10/18/2013 05:21:19 am
My favorite food is donuts
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Rachel
10/18/2013 05:26:26 am
Soft smooth creamy nutty crunchy AWSOME!!!
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Zoie
10/18/2013 06:01:09 am
Queso
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:06:25 am
All good chefs should be proud of their food! :) I also loved that it was "sizzling".
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Tytan
10/18/2013 06:25:24 am
My is a pumpkin muffin. It is so creamy and it taste like ginger bred and it is so good and sweet creamy I love it
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:09:04 am
Yum. I love Ginger Bread!
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Aaron Evans
10/18/2013 06:56:35 am
Cookie cake = as you eat the chocolate the taste melts in your mouth the icing is as smooth as a pillow the cookie crunches as you eat it .
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:10:44 am
Mmmm! Your description makes me want to head to the mall!
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William
10/18/2013 07:04:12 am
My favorite food is octopus with green beans. When you bite into it all of a sudden a ZIP goes through your mouth. Then you hear a CRUNCH! You see green bean juice go all over your plate. You feel the octopus tentical wiggle in your mouth (who said it was dead?) That part was just for fun. Anyway you then smell the lovely smell of octopi.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:12:27 am
Your description made me laugh, Will! I actually really like Octopus. :) I've never had it with green beans though.
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Tatum Robert
10/18/2013 07:10:08 am
My favorite food is the Oreo Pie that my mom makes. It is a layered ice cream dessert. The bottom layer is crunchy, crushed up Oreos. The next layer is creamy vanilla ice cream. After that, there is a thick delicious chocolate fudge layer. The top layer is smooth and yummy cool whip.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:15:46 am
Tatum! Way to go! I love the way you organized your writing. I can picture the layers. Transition words! I love the way those are sprinkled throughout your description. :)
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Gracie
10/18/2013 08:24:33 am
My favorite food is chocolate ice cream. The delicious, creamy chocolate. Mmm.
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Gabriela
10/18/2013 09:04:44 am
I love chocolate ice cream to Gracie mmmmm!!!!
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Sydney
10/19/2013 06:26:43 am
Me to!
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:28:06 am
Me to!I so love it!😄
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:29:11 am
Me to!I so love it!😄cool❤️💚💜💙💛
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:30:15 am
Me to!I so love it!😄cool❤️💚💜💙💛💖!!!
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:31:05 am
Me to!I so love it!😄cool❤️💚💜💙💛💖!WOW!
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:31:27 am
Me to!I so love it😄cool❤️💚💜💙💛💖WOW!
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:31:42 am
Me to!I so love it😄cool❤️💚💜💙💛💖WOW.
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:32:06 am
Me to!I so love it cool WOW.
Sydney
10/19/2013 06:33:42 am
Me to i so love it cool wow!
Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:16:58 am
You've convinced me. I'll be heading to my freezer now!
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Gabriela
10/18/2013 08:58:46 am
The sweet tangy taste it's a warm texture nice and juicy chicken with nice sawse that just smells and taste wonder full it's nice and cooked well it has that great and soft rice!!!!
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:18:17 am
Yummy! Nice description, but don't forget to use complete sentences.
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Gabriela
10/18/2013 09:02:08 am
Oh and I almost forgot my favorite food is ICE CREAM IT'S AWSOM!!
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Aidan Liam Hernandez
10/18/2013 01:17:16 pm
My favorite food is arroz con leche and it's color is white and it tastes like this it's sweet and it tastes like cinnamon and it smells kind of nutty and it smells like cinnamon also.
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Aidan Hernandez
10/18/2013 01:50:24 pm
My favorite food is arroz con leche it feels like this it is it feels fluffy and wet this is how it tastes lightly sweetened and has a touch of cinnamon also it's color looks white as snow and it smells like this also
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:43:52 am
What time of year do you usually have arroz con leche?
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Aidan
10/21/2013 07:45:23 am
You can have it every time of the year it can be served in summer or in winter
Caden H.
10/19/2013 01:27:40 am
My favorite food is Lobster. Lobster taste juicy and good at the same time. When you break the shell you can smell it and hear the shell break. When you touch it it's warm and if you press on it hard the juice comes out.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:44:50 am
Lobster! Yum!
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Sydney
10/19/2013 06:23:23 am
CHERY BREAD
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:50:12 am
Cherry bread sounds yummy. Don't forget to use complete sentences.
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Zander
10/19/2013 09:34:42 am
My favorite food is pizza the reason why I like in it because I like the hot cheesy cheese and the tender juicy pepperoni.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:49:21 am
I'm almost convinced. Tell me more!
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Joseph
10/19/2013 10:15:32 am
My favorite food is chicken pot pie. The reason I chose it is because every time I taste it it feels warm, juicey, and taste just seeps into your mouth. The texture of it is warm, smooth, and smooshy. When I smell it, it's smells of cooked vegtables, and a pie. What it looks like is that it looks like a pie but with vegtables and the smell is wonderful. It is a delicous combination of pie and vegtables.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:53:09 am
Wow! I think the O'Neal household may be having chicken pot pie this week. :)
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Logan
10/20/2013 02:05:25 am
I have two they are called grilled pizza sandwich and honey baked ham. They look very good on the pictures and the comments everybody loved it! I wish I could try it right now! The cool thing is I look at the picture and could taste it already!
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:51:22 am
:)
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Kara Morrow
10/20/2013 02:06:23 am
My favorite food is spaghetti because, it is good.
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Mrs. O
10/20/2013 07:13:49 am
Wow! I'm convinced. Sign me up for Spaghetti and Meatballs!
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Logan
10/20/2013 02:22:37 am
I messed up. I like spaghetti and meatballs.
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Logan
10/20/2013 02:22:53 am
I messed up. I like spaghetti and meatballs.
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Logan kolbo
10/20/2013 02:23:13 am
I messed up. I like spaghetti and meatballs.
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Logan kolbo
10/20/2013 02:23:27 am
I messed up. I like spaghetti and meatballs.
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Travis
10/20/2013 04:59:56 am
My favorite food taste so creamy it tast so good and it is macaroni and cheese
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Eshen maresch
10/20/2013 05:04:31 am
My favorite food is Chicken fried rice at Thai basil. I like that the rice
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Isabelle
10/20/2013 07:23:29 am
My favorite food is brownies. Brownies are sweet choclately delicious. They are sweet and they smell good. They smell like choclate deliciousness. You can hear the delicious sizzling sound that you'll love.
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Christiana Ussery
10/20/2013 09:19:05 am
My favorite food is the banana pudding that my Grammy makes. it is thick and creamy. it has small bits of banana and lots of vanilla wafers. it is so sweet and creamy and smooth.
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austin
10/20/2013 09:22:49 am
My favorite food is chicken wings. The best part of the wing is the white juicy meat. The sauce that I like to put on my wings is BBQ sauce. They are the best right off the grill. Hot and spicy is the way I like them.
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Anthony
10/20/2013 09:39:02 am
Try tasting this. YUMMY pancakes on a pan. Think of all the surup
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Michael
10/20/2013 09:53:23 am
Wings are the best. They taste delicious. They make me go crazy.
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karizma
10/20/2013 10:12:36 am
Pizza
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Emma
10/20/2013 10:36:53 am
My favorite food is cheesecake bites. It has a crunchy pastry shell that looks like a tiny bowl. It is filled up with yummy cream cheese to the top of the shell. I put fresh cut strawberries, blueberries, and my favorite raspberries on top.
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Sierra
10/20/2013 11:02:25 am
I like cookie cakes there good!!!!mmmmmm
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Janiya
10/20/2013 12:09:09 pm
Mine is pizza how it is so juicy with all the cheese and it can sometime it Han be hot and hot water. Mmm I
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Annsleigh
10/20/2013 12:14:01 pm
My mom's Mac and cheese is so delicious!!! It's really cheesey and creamy. The smell of the cheese makes my mouth water. I like the big shells, whenever you bite the noodle cheese squirts out in your mouth. I like it warm and fresh from the stove. YUMMY😃😃😃
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Daniel Hernandez
10/21/2013 04:20:07 am
My moms spigeti is so yummy.The spigeti has cheese, chicken and noodles. It has so much taste. It's so smooth. It smells so good. It tast so delishish.
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Krilon
10/21/2013 07:42:34 am
I love sausage and pizza
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Aidan
10/21/2013 08:54:25 am
Arroz con leche..can be served chilled in the summer time or hot to warm your tumbly on cooler days, you can even make Popsicles
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Aidan
10/21/2013 09:10:39 am
Arroz con leche can be served just as a cold or hot cereal or oatmeal bowl would be served for breakfast, dessert hot or chilled for holidays,or made into yummy Popsicles ,for dinner like a hot bowl of creamy soup.Delicioso.. I like it wen my mom puts it in a cup to go when we are running late.
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Aidan
10/21/2013 09:14:48 am
It's like ,candy dessert, breakfast lunch and dinner, it can be hot or cold or frozen anytime, there is only one thing it cannot be ...a vegetable
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