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Elizabeth Volkmann
4/1/2024 03:43:25 am
SPRING FLING ENTRY 2024
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Lorraine McCown
4/1/2024 05:25:51 am
I love this Beth! And Sylvie means forest, so bravo to you for that subtle nod!
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Jacinta
4/1/2024 08:19:04 am
This is a beautiful, lyrical little story!
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Erin Rew
4/1/2024 01:16:21 pm
What a lovely story. Oh, how I want this to be true. 🥰💐
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Kelly Kates
4/1/2024 01:16:23 pm
Beautiful!
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Karyn Curtis
4/3/2024 05:09:59 pm
I love this, Beth!
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Angela Martinelli
4/3/2024 10:01:46 pm
Lovely idea, beautifully written, makes me smile and Sylvie is a fitting name!
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MARY Z
4/4/2024 11:14:37 am
Very nice! I love the imagery.
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Russell Wolff
4/8/2024 08:07:28 am
Such a beautiful story. I love the mood and the delightful imagery: "left Spring to struggle in a muddy puddle," "hunched under cloudy skies," "planted a promise..." Great job!
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Sandie Vaisnoras
4/30/2024 11:45:20 am
Bravo, Beth! Excellent poem. Renee and Lou will be proud.
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Allison Vestal-Laborde
4/1/2024 04:26:32 am
"We Inch" https://i.pinimg.com/originals/7e/56/5b/7e565bb20c887433358cee738da7e6b8.gif
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Lorraine McCown
4/1/2024 05:27:54 am
SPRING OF HOPE
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Elizabeth Volkmann
4/1/2024 05:43:37 am
Lorraine, what a lovely, heart-warming story - in rhyme! :) So lovely!
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:03:38 am
Thanks so much Beth (true story!) 4/1/2024 07:41:55 am
So touching! My favorite line was "A spring hatched frame of feathers came"!
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:05:41 am
Thank you Julie! Cockatiels are so cute when their prickly little pin feathers are coming in.
Jacinta Patterson
4/1/2024 08:31:14 am
Your rhythm and rhyme are lovely! What a hopeful story. ❤️
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:06:44 am
Thanks so much Jacinta! It is a true story! 4/1/2024 08:40:51 am
A lovely story of renewal and I can certainly relate to the drawing strength from the unconditional love of an animal.
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:09:36 am
Thank you Charmaine! You sound like 'my people'. Animals seem to know when snuggles are needed (Yes, birds snuggle!) and are sometimes just what the Dr. ordered. 4/1/2024 12:27:09 pm
So thankful for any kind of friend that can make "normal seem much closer." I absolutely love your poem.
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:12:42 am
Oh my gosh, Ginger. Thank you so much. I really appreciate how specific your feedback is. Normal has been a pretty elusive thing for many to find (or even reinvent for themselves) over the last few years.
Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:13:56 am
Thank you so much for taking a peek at it Susan. I really appreciate your comment.
Lorraine McCown
4/3/2024 02:16:29 pm
Thank you so much for your kind words, Melanie! 4/3/2024 07:56:04 am
Heartwarming, Lorraine. And I love the circular ending - Rumbling free, ALIVE!
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Lorraine McCown
4/3/2024 02:17:40 pm
Awe - thank you Ashley. It is based on a true story.
Jayne Ferreira
4/3/2024 01:19:56 pm
This is truly beautiful!
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Lorraine McCown
4/3/2024 02:18:58 pm
Thank you so much, Jayne. I appreciate that you took the time to comment.
Karyn Curtis
4/3/2024 05:11:26 pm
Wow, what an amazing story, Lorraine!
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Lorraine McCown
4/5/2024 05:32:32 am
Thanks so much Karyn! 4/6/2024 07:25:56 am
This is so inspiring, Lorraine. I love your use of the word "skritches!"
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Lorraine McCown
4/9/2024 11:09:08 am
Thank so much, Amy. You must be a birder. I was worried some might think it was a typo but 'skritches' is definitely the word that parrot owners use. Thanks again for taking the time to read this.
Russell Wolff
4/6/2024 09:35:44 am
This is such a compelling story of healing and connection. The writing is beautiful!
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Lorraine McCown
4/9/2024 11:12:09 am
Awe - thanks Russell! I really appreciate that you took the time to read it and leave such kind feedback.
Russell Wolff
4/1/2024 06:34:39 am
MARCH
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4/1/2024 08:43:00 am
What a unique perspective and beautifully written.
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Russell Wolff
4/1/2024 02:45:59 pm
Thanks, Charmaine!
Lauren Simmons
4/1/2024 09:40:38 am
Love this fun characterization of the months!
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Russell Wolff
4/1/2024 02:47:16 pm
Thank you, Lauren!
Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:17:02 am
I love this Russell - especially the "cuddled", then "gently tucking" in imagery!
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Russell Wolff
4/2/2024 07:53:37 am
Thank you, Lorraine!
Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 07:54:22 am
Loved the POV of months. Great story.
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Russell Wolff
4/2/2024 10:47:59 am
Thank you, Suhasini!
Mary Z.
4/4/2024 11:19:29 am
Very unique perspective. I like it!
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Russell Wolff
4/4/2024 02:21:34 pm
Thanks, Mary!
Karyn Curtis
4/5/2024 06:39:29 am
What a wonderful personification of the seasons, Russell! Nicely done!
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Russell Wolff
4/6/2024 03:43:19 pm
Thanks, Karyn! 4/1/2024 07:07:10 am
SHE BLOOMED WHEN SHE BLOOMED
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4/1/2024 08:45:40 am
Every kid loves dandelions. "Cotton candy breath" is brilliant. Good job.
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Lauren Simmons
4/1/2024 09:41:40 am
Well done, Lori!
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 07:56:47 am
Beautiful 😍
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Jayne Ferreira
4/2/2024 05:20:16 pm
This is lovely!
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Rebecca Loveday
4/3/2024 01:52:21 am
This is lovely, Lori. My daughter (11) enjoyed it too.
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Katie Mahood
4/3/2024 02:42:20 pm
This is so lovely Lori, I love the dandelions in Springtime, and you painted such a vivid picture, delicate pappus, cotton candy breath, BEATIFUL!
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4/3/2024 03:41:31 pm
Thank you so much, Katie! In Florida we are already seeing dandelions 😊
Lauren Simmons
4/1/2024 07:09:37 am
The No-Touch Petting Zoo
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4/1/2024 08:49:58 am
Cute. It's always nice to remind kids that animals have feelings.
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Jacinta Patterson
4/1/2024 08:50:47 am
This is so creative!
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 07:58:37 am
HA! This is so fun! 😍
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Katie Mahood
4/3/2024 02:36:03 pm
This is so much fun Lauren, I LOVE the voice!
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Russell Wolff
4/6/2024 09:29:49 am
This goat makes some great points. (And humans definitely are kind of a mess lol.) The goat has a really fun voice!
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Ashley Reynolds
4/1/2024 07:09:59 am
THE NOT SO DANGEROUS DINOSAUR
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:29:13 am
Nice ending. This reminded me of Ferdinand (by Leaf), which my kids now read to their kids.
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Kathleen MacEachern
4/1/2024 07:27:04 am
The Picture Day Sneeze!
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Jacinta Patterson
4/1/2024 09:05:09 am
Hahaha. Very relatable to all the pollen-averse.
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4/1/2024 09:13:42 am
Yikes! I've heard of school picture fails, but this is a disaster. Kids will love it.
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Lauren Simmons
4/1/2024 09:52:16 am
Well done, Kathleen! Very relatable!
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Inge Visser-Doğan
4/2/2024 03:31:31 am
Love it Kathleen. Very relatable
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:32:12 am
Sneak sneeze attacks are so real and can't be helped - so relatable!
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:02:08 am
How fun! 😁
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Jayne Ferreira
4/2/2024 05:23:55 pm
Love this, Kathleen!
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4/3/2024 06:14:51 pm
Your rhyme flows beautifully here and the story is so fun! Well done!
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4/1/2024 07:38:44 am
So excited for this year's contest!
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Lauren Simmons
4/1/2024 09:44:12 am
I love your entry, Julie! Read it on your blog this morning :)
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4/1/2024 07:49:04 am
https://media.giphy.com/media/v1.Y2lkPTc5MGI3NjExbWwzZmU3OHNtOXF0Y2h5N2R5a3Fpd2p6cXByYnFxN3l2YnJ3d2NxbiZlcD12MV9pbnRlcm5hbF9naWZfYnlfaWQmY3Q9Zw/26FeVOdg773OsqeAw/giphy.gif
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Jacinta Patterson
4/1/2024 09:07:23 am
This is so creative and heartwarming! Love the gif and what you did with it. :)
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4/1/2024 09:16:26 am
I always get a kick out of seeing a telephone booth and I've seen some funny reactions from kids when they see them. I love your last line, what a great tie-in.
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Lauren Simmons
4/1/2024 09:48:10 am
This is such a fun perspective - love it!
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:39:15 am
This is really nice and the Clark Kent tie in at the end is perfect. I think I might be a little older than you... It was a dime for me!
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Russell Wolff
4/8/2024 08:31:53 am
This is such a fun perspective! I love the title, and the section describing it's experience as an umbrella for the girl brings a lot of emotion.
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Jessica Russo
4/1/2024 07:55:53 am
THE HARE AND SNAIL SALON
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Jessica Russo
4/1/2024 08:34:26 am
So sorry about this huge gap under my entry. I copied and pasted, but must have been issues with spacing!
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4/1/2024 09:17:28 am
Your title is amazing and the creativity continues throughout. Very cute.
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Jessica Russo
4/2/2024 08:00:44 am
Thank you so much for reading, Charmaine!
Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:06:30 am
Cute story! 😍
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Deloris Short White
4/2/2024 04:25:35 pm
After stowing away for the winter, these critters were certainly in need of spring sprucing. It is a clever story and a catchy title.
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Angela Martinelli
4/3/2024 10:07:13 pm
So creative and funny! Love it!
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4/1/2024 08:14:21 am
I don't have a blog, so here is my entry. (70-words)
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4/1/2024 08:31:35 am
Oops. Forgot to post the gif.
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Jayne Ferreira
4/4/2024 07:04:29 pm
Super cute!
Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:46:50 am
Nice idea. That new tail thing is so amazing. I wish I could read this to the (no longer) blue tailed skink that frequents my front door stoop these days for his sun bath. I see back matter!
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:08:13 am
Lovely 😍
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Deloris Short White
4/2/2024 04:30:49 pm
I witnessed this cycle of life this morning watching robins get those wiggly worms. Worms work hard to improve the soil - environmental helpers. We should all do our share.
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Danna Zeiger
4/4/2024 12:05:25 pm
So clever and creative! I love this unique POV!
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Karyn Curtis
4/5/2024 06:41:23 am
Adorable!
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Russell Wolff
4/8/2024 08:39:09 am
Fun! Love the tension conveyed so concisely in the description of Frog, Mole, and Robin hunting.
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4/1/2024 09:12:38 am
https://giphy.com/embed/ZEaEpXemtVDRra0V07
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4/1/2024 12:31:16 pm
This is great. I love the pun of "stamp of approval," and "happy hinges" is a fantastic expression for a mailbox.
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:50:09 am
Creative - you had me at the bird christenings. I think I've finally figured out a way to keep them from delivering things to the top of my mailbox.
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:09:55 am
Loved it! 😍
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Rebecca Loveday
4/3/2024 01:58:39 am
Love this. A fun and fresh perspective!
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Maddie Sandell
4/1/2024 09:58:35 am
https://media.giphy.com/media/v1.Y2lkPTc5MGI3NjExaGh6ZWxpdzEwMDF3ajRzZmlpd2pxcnF3c3gxNTMyN2sycW85ejAzZCZlcD12MV9pbnRlcm5hbF9naWZfYnlfaWQmY3Q9Zw/Su12DRycqCCOjwHJkE/giphy.gif
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4/1/2024 12:35:13 pm
So cute, funny, and informative. I laughed out loud at the idea of a bee sneezing and "breaking into hives." I didn't know hydrangeas were allergy-friendly. Is that true or did you make it up for the story?
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:53:40 am
I can totally see an allergy afflicted kid asking their parents to plant these after reading this! (and any other low pollen releasing plants - I see back matter!)
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4/1/2024 10:13:06 am
FULL WORM MOON
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4/1/2024 12:41:04 pm
Beautiful, as always, Ashley. Funny that we both chose worms. I couldn't get your link to work, so I didn't see your gif. Did you make your own?
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4/1/2024 08:14:16 pm
Oh! I will have to check the gif link. Thanks for letting me know. I don’t know why it is such a long link address…
Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 06:57:23 am
Full worm moon - I didn't know this was a thing until I looked it up. Bravo!
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:14:36 am
This sounds amazing. 👌 loved the rhyme and the title.
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Mary beth rice
4/2/2024 10:30:51 am
I love this! This is magical and stirs the heart. Love how you have described earth awakening in the spring!
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Elizabeth Volkmann
4/2/2024 02:35:58 pm
Lovely and sweet! Well done!
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4/2/2024 10:01:07 pm
Ashley, this is delightful! Such smooth rhythm and rhyme!
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4/3/2024 07:30:23 am
Apologies for the non-working gif link in my posted story. This one should work! Thanks for the heads up Charmaine Langlois!
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Jayne Ferreira
4/3/2024 01:23:52 pm
So lovely!
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Angela Martinelli
4/3/2024 10:14:14 pm
Love this poem for the full worm moon and the beginnings of spring!
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Katie Lee Reinert
4/1/2024 10:23:08 am
https://giphy.com/clips/spring-mgdoodlestudio-michelle-goggins-lqPUq6RaRCzC8B8uPm
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4/1/2024 12:43:28 pm
Hurray for Spring springing! This is really cute.
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:16:00 am
This is fun and cute 😍
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4/1/2024 10:43:07 am
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4/1/2024 12:48:34 pm
I couldn't find your gif, but I assume it's a duck playing baseball. That would be fun to see.
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B.Z. Humdrum
4/1/2024 10:52:50 am
https://tenor.com/view/spring-beaver-agonyhole-gif-26398434
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4/1/2024 12:51:40 pm
I love this gif. I've shared it with the grandkids before and they think it's hilarious. You've done a terrific job of building a unique story around it. Good luck.
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Karyn Curtis
4/5/2024 06:47:20 am
Hilarious!
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Jacinta Patterson
4/1/2024 10:57:19 am
https://tenor.com/view/easter-happy-easter-easter-egg-gif-14018465
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 07:16:49 am
Bravo, Jacinta.
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:20:40 am
Sounds fun!😀
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4/3/2024 02:08:35 pm
Excellent job, Jacinta! You had us cheering for Saliba all the way!
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Gretchen Pitluk
4/1/2024 12:01:40 pm
SAKURA'S PROMISE
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 07:22:18 am
"blush-hued canopy... falling like fragrant snow"
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Angela Martinelli
4/3/2024 10:17:30 pm
I feel like there are so many layers of meanings here. Just beautiful!
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4/1/2024 12:38:30 pm
Waking up
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:24:36 am
Very cute 😍
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4/2/2024 09:06:27 am
I never thought about what a bear thinks when it comes out of hibernation. Nicely done.
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Amanda Blaylock
4/4/2024 07:17:28 am
Thanks so much guys/gals, for the support !!
Angela Martinelli
4/3/2024 10:22:07 pm
Love hearing the bear’s thoughts and perspective about waking up to spring! So sweet Amanda!
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Kelly Kates
4/1/2024 01:19:45 pm
So cute, Amanda! Love it!
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Amanda Blaylock
4/4/2024 07:16:20 am
Thank you so much Kelly!
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4/1/2024 02:15:01 pm
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/02/ce/79/02ce7945c01a4d62f78e480ca9c51f00.gif
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:27:18 am
Loved it! 😄
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Seth Mueller
4/1/2024 02:59:43 pm
Hey, Lazy Lackadaisy
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Seth Mueller
4/1/2024 03:01:20 pm
Replying to add my gif: https://media1.giphy.com/media/l3q2Pc7MJZRbxpjNK/giphy.webp?cid=6c09b952e47785inn615uo0ha486bynbea732osg8zu1x4o4&ep=v1_internal_gif_by_id&rid=giphy.webp&ct=g
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:32:46 am
Lovely rhyme 😍
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Seth Mueller
4/2/2024 10:20:59 am
Thank you! Interestingly, you complimented my 50 precious words entry, as well! (The Sad Sock) 4/2/2024 09:10:24 am
Great rhythm. I imagine kids skipping rope and singing this.
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Seth Mueller
4/2/2024 10:47:52 am
Thank you! I was kinda going for a "go outside and play; it's springtime" vibe and was aiming for that bouncy jump rope/patty cake kind of rhythm. Appreciate you!
Amanda Blaylock
4/4/2024 07:19:10 am
This is so much fun to read out loud! Well done!
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Amanda Rotondo
4/1/2024 05:09:36 pm
GIF available here: https://photos.app.goo.gl/SU1LcBjqwZqnxXJs5
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:30:36 am
How fun and cute! 😁
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4/2/2024 09:13:32 am
I love everything about this, from Gnorman's name to his intolerance of anything new, to the fabulous ending.
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4/1/2024 09:14:15 pm
GIF is available here https://images.app.goo.gl/8JyYGE36qD6FDQAv5
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4/1/2024 09:40:36 pm
Replying to add my twitter handle, @thesusankam.
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4/2/2024 09:15:52 am
Good for donkey, realizing he's happier being himself.
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Lauren Simmons
4/2/2024 12:40:33 pm
Love this - so cute! Well done, Suhasini!
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Katie Mahood
4/3/2024 02:47:04 pm
Donkey learned a valuable lesson and had a lot of fun adventures too! Love this Suhasini!
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Russell Wolff
4/6/2024 09:43:05 am
The donkey's efforts to find an easier life are a lot of fun to read. Hope he has a little time to rest before heading back to work! :)
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Inge Visser Doğan
4/1/2024 10:17:05 pm
Vuuv, vuuv
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4/2/2024 09:20:05 am
Couldn't see your gif, but there is a lot of excitement happening here.
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4/1/2024 11:13:16 pm
The Adventures of Dewey the Bunny!
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4/2/2024 09:22:11 am
Poor Dewey. Let's hope Teddy provides a more loving home.
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kimberly
4/1/2024 11:16:18 pm
twitter handle is @kimsz11. thanks for notifying me about this contest, kim hoa ung!
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Kanessa Miller Doss
4/2/2024 03:53:53 am
Homework Mishaps
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:36:04 am
Haha! Making a kite out of homework. Fun!😁
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Kanessa Doss
4/2/2024 09:38:33 am
Yes, spring should be filled with fun! 😂 4/2/2024 09:24:37 am
I think I know that kid. LOL. Well written and relatable.
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Kanessa Doss
4/2/2024 09:36:10 am
Me, too! Thank you! :)
Kris DeCaro
4/2/2024 04:56:26 am
To a Lost Friend
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Suhasini Gupta
4/2/2024 08:37:20 am
Aww! 🤗🙂
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 05:35:03 pm
I think everyone who reads this will remember a k-12 'incident' they wish had happened differently, with an opportunity to clear up misunderstandings.
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Katie Mahood
4/3/2024 02:48:18 pm
Kris, this got me in all the feels! So much emotion in so few words, well done!
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Karyn Curtis
4/5/2024 06:50:25 am
So sweet!
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4/2/2024 08:52:07 am
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4/2/2024 09:27:53 am
I love how you make a rainy day sound so much fun.
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Deloris Short White
4/2/2024 10:37:07 am
Thank you, Charmaine. We certainly have had a lot of rainy days to practice. 4/2/2024 09:26:36 am
Hello Fellow Writers! I'm posting my entry for the 2024 3kidlit contest here. it is also on my blog which is listed on the chart but it seems readers are having difficulty accessing it. Enjoy!(138 words)
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4/2/2024 10:53:16 am
So sad, but nice that Grandma could find a way to explain things.
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Deborah Ishii
4/2/2024 12:30:17 pm
Thank you, Charmaine! My Grandma really was special!
Angela Martinelli
4/2/2024 12:13:54 pm
The message in the last two stanzas is very beautiful and helps comfort during this impossible situation. You’ve navigated a hard topic well. I wrote a piece with essentially the same title, also about loss and grief, but it tells a different story. I find comfort in your piece too. Thank you for sharing. I am trying to figure out how to post mine to the comments.
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Deborah Ishii
4/15/2024 12:16:57 pm
I love your piece as well. Such warm and special memories!
Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 05:39:51 pm
A very kind, wise grandma to offer such comfort.
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Deborah Ishii
4/15/2024 12:19:20 pm
My Grandma was a gentle and loving woman who spread love everywhere!
Karyn Curtis
4/3/2024 05:07:38 pm
Oh, so sweet and heartbreaking, Deborah!
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Deborah Ishii
4/15/2024 12:20:34 pm
Thank you, Karyn!
Mikki
4/2/2024 11:00:30 am
March into Spring
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4/3/2024 06:31:14 am
Aww. I wanted to see Rue throw that snowball at the judges. LOL. I love all the pun in your story. Very cute.
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Jayne Ferreira
4/3/2024 01:27:22 pm
Super cute and clever!
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Angela Martinelli
4/2/2024 11:35:38 am
Grammy’s Garden
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Deborah Ishii
4/2/2024 12:27:53 pm
I love the imagery in your story, Angela! Your characters, even Grammy, have been brought to life through your words. The final message of creating memories by continuing traditions is heartwarming!
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Lorraine McCown
4/2/2024 05:43:33 pm
I love that our elders pass down the wonder of new growth to young potential gardeners. My Dad always had a garden too.
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4/3/2024 06:27:45 am
Gardens are the best for reflections and memories.
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Amanda Blaylock
4/4/2024 07:24:34 am
This is such a relatable feeling. Great job with connecting the cycle of life to the cycle of the seasons! It is such a bitter-sweet thing that life goes on. You captured it perfectly and still managed to be reassuring. GREAT JOB!
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Shristi Vaidya
4/2/2024 12:19:28 pm
Easter Egg Hunt & Nepali New Year (150 words)
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Kiran
4/3/2024 02:24:11 am
Love it! I love the addition of Resham Phiriri. :)
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4/6/2024 07:37:02 am
I love how Kriti problem solves in a way that is authentic to her cultural identity and values. The message is beautiful and inclusive.
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4/2/2024 12:42:31 pm
Chocolate Charlie Takes a Taste
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Charline Barger
4/3/2024 05:39:58 pm
Thanks!
Ryann Jones
4/2/2024 05:08:04 pm
Mr. Mom
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4/3/2024 06:21:20 am
I loved that movie. Your story relates well to the gif. It's funny because of all the things that go wrong, but inspiring because your family finds a way to make everything work.
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Nicole Garnett
4/3/2024 01:44:10 pm
Awe, love this Ryann!! I feel this and what my husband attempts each Mother's day to my core! haha great job!
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Angela Martinelli
4/3/2024 09:43:09 pm
So sweet and funny too! I’m smiling!
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Megan McNamara
4/2/2024 09:28:27 pm
OUTSIDE, THERE’S A POEM
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4/3/2024 06:16:23 am
What a lovely story that all kids, and writers, can relate to.
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Lorraine McCown
4/3/2024 02:24:53 pm
I really like your this. Brain breaks outdoors often make the inside work better anyways.
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Katherine Rea
4/2/2024 10:08:38 pm
In the Anza-Borrego Desert
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4/3/2024 06:14:02 am
Beautifully written and interesting to read. I never knew the desert could be so vibrant.
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Katherine Rea
4/18/2024 10:14:17 am
Hey thank you so much! So kind of you to say. 4/3/2024 02:07:33 pm
Wonderful, lyrical descriptions! Loved the slow unfolding of spring.
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Katherine Rea
4/18/2024 10:14:31 am
Thank you!
Lorraine McCown
4/3/2024 02:27:01 pm
You wrote so I felt like I was there, watching it all unfold - so beautiful!
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Katherine Rea
4/18/2024 10:14:54 am
Thank you :) 4/3/2024 01:27:01 am
https://giphy.com/clips/storyful-animals-weather-and-science-temperatures-rising-bXEn5JpPAfk0ZWfcv2
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4/3/2024 06:10:52 am
Wonderful story, and I love the names you've chosen for the birds.
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Rebecca Loveday
4/3/2024 07:22:00 am
Thank you, Charmaine! I had the best time choosing the names!
Lorraine McCown
4/3/2024 02:31:31 pm
Your story plays out at my birdbaths regularly - it made me smile!
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Angela Martinelli
4/3/2024 09:48:35 pm
So clever! The names, the rhyming, everything!
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Amanda Blaylock
4/4/2024 07:27:22 am
Oh the names! This is like being tickled pink to read. So much FUN! Wonderful writing!
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Erin Will
4/3/2024 08:52:09 am
https://images.app.goo.gl/Agqd31QcnJphsZ6N9
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4/4/2024 06:40:19 am
What a great counting story. The imagery is beautiful.
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Katherine Lobur
4/3/2024 09:36:57 am
THE LEGEND OF A CROCUS
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Jan Schwaid
4/3/2024 09:56:23 am
The Snail Who Soared
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4/3/2024 03:07:19 pm
So so beautiful, I love colors, snaily words, and the imagery here :-) Such a beautiful friendship!
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Jan Schwaid
4/3/2024 11:03:03 pm
Aww thank you so much!!! 4/4/2024 06:38:13 am
Sweet story of friendship and making the impossible possible.
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4/3/2024 11:17:47 am
Gif: https://media4.giphy.com/media/v1.Y2lkPTc5MGI3NjExeHFwNXpwMmE0eWh1cWFmMHIwOHpzNHV0azh5OGhrNDdqdXZjcjhvZCZlcD12MV9naWZzX3NlYXJjaCZjdD1n/FZzbTJyRTwPuw/giphy.webp
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Julie Hauswirth
4/3/2024 12:00:19 pm
Katie, I love this story! Such a great entry. Good luck!!
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4/3/2024 02:03:01 pm
Aww, thanks so much, Julie! May the fire of your writing never go out. :) 4/3/2024 12:07:38 pm
The Dock
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4/3/2024 02:03:53 pm
I love this personification! What a patient dock. :)
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Jayne Ferreira
4/3/2024 12:09:14 pm
https://tenor.com/view/paka-gif-7799077
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Karyn Curtis
4/3/2024 05:01:14 pm
Ha, this is fabulous, Jayne!
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Jayne Ferreira
4/3/2024 05:57:45 pm
Thank you so much, Karyn!
Karyn Curtis
4/3/2024 12:16:12 pm
Puddle-Jumping
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Deborah Ishii
4/3/2024 12:58:27 pm
I love the puddle-jumping images you've evoked in your poem. Your rhymes are amazing! It's almost as if the words were sitting there waiting for you to insert into the proper places. Bravo!
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Karyn Curtis
4/3/2024 05:02:15 pm
Thank you, Deborah! That's so kind!
Lorraine McCown
4/3/2024 02:43:07 pm
No mom could refuse such an adorably gleeful muddy child! Nice rhyme too.
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Karyn Curtis
4/3/2024 05:02:45 pm
Thanks, Lorraine!
Karyn Curtis
4/5/2024 06:36:19 am
LOL, thanks!
Beth Volkmann
4/5/2024 01:23:09 pm
Karyn!
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Karyn Curtis
4/5/2024 02:08:29 pm
LOL, that's the tricky part for sure! Thanks, Beth!
Mary Beth Rice
4/3/2024 12:40:22 pm
BEZONKERS FOR BABE
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Stefanie Raszler
4/3/2024 02:36:44 pm
I love how even the sun and moon rejoiced in the new baby!
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mary beth rice
4/3/2024 03:33:33 pm
Thank you, Stef! 4/3/2024 06:21:03 pm
alliterations are great!
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Mary Beth Rice
4/4/2024 07:40:29 am
Thank you Susan! Babies are the best! ;-) 4/4/2024 06:28:00 am
Lovely, and timely with the eclipse happening on Monday.
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Cindy Greene
4/5/2024 07:39:42 am
Such fun language and imagery! I really love the face scrunched like a pickle, and the family swelling with emotion.
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4/3/2024 01:02:37 pm
Oh, I want to squish and snuggle that sweet baby boy too! Adorable.
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Mary Beth Rice
4/3/2024 03:34:25 pm
Thanks, Ashley!
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Kate C.
4/3/2024 02:06:50 pm
Blossom Day
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4/3/2024 02:46:46 pm
Sky Wolves Nesting
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Jayne Ferreira
4/4/2024 05:36:45 am
Love this, beautiful imagery!
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4/4/2024 06:23:36 am
Very nice. I didn't know hawks work together this way.
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4/3/2024 03:01:49 pm
The Weather is Funny (140 words)
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4/4/2024 06:21:14 am
That sounds like the spring we're having this year. I was walking with a light jacket two days ago and today, I'm looking at snow.
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Karyn Curtis
4/5/2024 06:56:32 am
I feel this! Such a fun--and accurate--depiction of spring!
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4/3/2024 03:04:51 pm
Thank you for this amazing contest, Kaitlyn, Ciara, and generous donors! My entry is on my website. This was so much fun!
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Jan Schwaid
4/3/2024 11:04:26 pm
The gif melted my heart! Such a beautiful and meaningful story with gorgeous imagery - GREAT job!!
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Danna Zeiger
4/4/2024 11:18:37 am
Thanks so so much!! <3 <3 4/4/2024 06:19:11 am
Lovely story. A Fairy Forest is the perfect setting.
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Danna Zeiger
4/4/2024 11:19:10 am
Awww thank you so much <3 <3
Lorraine McCown
4/5/2024 05:37:55 am
I love this idea of littles helping little. Kids really do give us the best sunshine of each day.
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4/3/2024 04:06:44 pm
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4/4/2024 10:45:49 am
Thank you! After starting with a few egg puns, I got on a roll☺️.
Cindy Greene
4/3/2024 05:39:03 pm
COOKING FOR MEL’S GRANDMA
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Cindy Greene
4/7/2024 05:33:24 am
Thanks! 4/4/2024 06:13:08 am
Sounds like Mel got the best deal. He got to spend time with Gran.
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Cindy Greene
4/7/2024 05:33:51 am
Thanks Charmaine!
Mary Beth Rice
4/11/2024 06:30:19 am
I love this Mother's Day story, Cindy! And Mel and Gran shared the best gift of all, time together having fun outside! Great rhythm too.
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4/3/2024 06:32:16 pm
Jump!
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4/4/2024 06:10:35 am
So sweet. I can definitely picture Josie trying to decide between keeping her boots clean and enjoying the puddle.
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Lorraine McCown
4/5/2024 05:49:13 am
This is so relatable! My tomboy side always fought with my strong perfectionist twist. I'm so glad that muddy fun (and her sister's encouragement) won her over!
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4/3/2024 07:12:32 pm
SPRING CHICK
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David Roberts
4/3/2024 07:16:26 pm
A Skunk’s Rainy Day
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4/3/2024 07:44:55 pm
Sundoggie’s Spring Break: A Totally Tubular Tail
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Lorraine McCown
4/5/2024 05:55:19 am
Paddling out for the perfect set is no joke! This brought me back to all the fruity smells of board wax on a Saturday morning. Bravo for introducing all the surf lingo.
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R Thill
4/3/2024 07:51:14 pm
Don’t Jump in the Puddle!
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Mary Z.
4/4/2024 11:23:49 am
I love the gif. ! So cute. Certainly had some tension there. Glad it turned out well for froggy!
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Lorraine McCown
4/5/2024 05:56:59 am
This made me smile!
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Mary Zychowicz
4/4/2024 11:12:28 am
Jamboree For Bear!
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